I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until i heard the noise just like a lion roar louder than 10000000000000 kid's screaming.I opened the door ah one book fell down to the floor and then the door closed in spooky sound i was brave it was behind my toys to find chese at last it came out and it was my pet mouse. from AISHA.
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until i heard the noise of a glass falling down from the table.I crept inside.When i saw the glass broken on the floor.I fixed the glass.Then a monster apperd and it said thank you.Then we all hade tea.by Mishca
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise "CLAM!" Something was there but who could it be?I thought it would be a terrifying ghost spying on me. It came again the noise. Something or somebody was moving out there. I felt drops of water slowly drooping like rain in slow motion! Al of a sudden there was a noise like something heavy vibrated the floor. I went in the secret room and I found beautiful money and jewelry things. In fact I never knew we were rich!
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until I heard the noise......It was Friday night.It's just me and my brother Keanu upstair.My mom is cooking our dinner in the kitchen.All of a sudden while me and Keanu are playing .I heard a noise.I went downstair and checked where the noise was coming from.I saw a small door .When I opened the door it was dark inside.When I came there,it's like magic. The table was flying.I really got scared and was about to close the door but then I still stayed.I saw old books,old chairs and lots of dirty and dusty old things.There was a bad smell inside.I can still hear a lot of noise.I am afraid it would be some silly mouse and crazy bats.This is really a scary room.I ran and went upstairs.I don't want to see that dark room again.I don't know if i still have to say this to my mum and dad.
I had no idea that there was a secret room in my house, when I found out I did not tell my mum and dad because then we will have to leave! "I want to find out more" I told myself. When I went to school I told my friends then they planed a plan, they said "we will come to your house to explore after school" they said.
We quietly pushed the door open CREAK!!! the door swung open, the room was as dark as a dungeon! luckily my best friend Lilly brought her torch from home just in case. The smell was hallow and cold. A sound like a wolf howling in the distance erupted out of nowhere ,clashing against the echoing of our footsteps.
We saw a black broomstick attached into the wall. There were two chairs rocking like some one sitting on them. Suddenly there was a noise like a lion, IT WAS A BOY!!!!! he had been playing tricks on them. by Methmi
I remember seeing the house for the first time. I was a child of seven. My young parents had just bought their first home. I remember I used to hate living in the cramped, dingy apartment we previously inhabited and opened the door to our new home with wide eyed wonder. It blew my young mind how spacious this house was. I went upstairs to scope out my bedroom. I was so excited that I was getting my own room and did not have to share it with my infant brother.
On my grand tour of my new digs, I finally made it down to our basement. The basement was nothing like the rest of the house. The upstairs was elegant and classy. The basement was cold, metallic, and sterile. The ceiling covered in ancient pipes winding in grotesque angles. The floor covered in rough cement. I recall taking a look at the stairs for the first time and being immediately struck with how odd they were.
The stairs were surrounded in drywall which clashed with the rest of the basement. One particular section of the wall was colored differently than the rest. It stood out like a sore thumb. I inched close to it and felt the texture of it. It felt very strange. I then knocked on it. A hollow sound pervaded the empty air of the basement. Something about that sound immediately put me ill at ease. I walked up the stairs as I could hear that same hollow sound echo in the emptiness of the basement.
As we settled into our new home, I began to get comfortable with my surroundings. The house began to feel familiar. Everywhere, that is, except for the basement. It just always put me off, and I avoided going down there as best as I could. Our family couldn’t be happier. My loving father and mother doted over me and my little brother. My life was perfect.
Then it began.
I would hear errant noises. When I pointed it out to my parents, they told me the old standby that the house was settling in. One night in particular indicated that something wasn’t right. I snuck downstairs to the kitchen for a late night snack. As I closed the refrigerator, I heard a tapping sound cut through the silence of the night. I craned my head to see if I could pinpoint where the sound was coming from. Dread began to wash over me as I realized that tapping was coming from the basement. I inched my way over to the basement door. I opened it to see the blackness of the depths below.
My ears perked up. There it was again. That hollow tapping sound. The same sound I had heard on my initial visit to the basement from hitting the drywall. I turned on the lights steeling myself to go down the stairs and investigate. The tapping continued as I took the first step. Fear overtook me. I ran back to my room and hid under my covers until the morning light gave way to a new day. By Mushtaq
I did not know that there was a secret room near the sitting room.One day I sneaked to the secret room I whent up the lift when the lift launched I came of It I launched at my secret library that I had been before but I didn't notice there was 2 way of getting there.Again I sneaked to library but the way I know how to get there I searched for my favorate book.
while I put on my socks I discovered my favorate book the reason I wore socks was because it was really dusty there.Another day I whent in the lift it took me to a restront.
I had no idea that there was a secret door to our attic room.One day I heard a strange noise coming from the secret door.I was so curious to look inside it.After that I opened the door and I saw that it was so dark and scary and dusty and there was lots of books and I grab one and ran out of there. The room was so messy and dirty and also there was a few spider webs hanging in the walls and there is a smell coming out somewhere.Then I quickly came out from the secret door because I was so scared.And I could not wait to tell everybody about the secret door mystery. by Mafalda
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise. I was sleeping in my bedroom a glass smashed on the floor. That was when I went downstairs and saw a secret room. I crept in and there it was. I found the secret room. As I crept in and the room I saw a knife on the floor with some red blood but it was actually ketchup .from Kavin
On last Saturday, Jack and his parents moved to a new house. When they arrived there, his parents were busy unpacking but Jack was started exploring the house. He noticed lots of white cupboards, walls painted in bright colours and brightly lit chandeliers. Then he entered a room which looked like a library with full of books. Meanwhile a bright yellow coloured book caught Jack's attention, he went close to the book and pulled it out of the shelve then his eyes lit up because he found a big shiny key. He took the key try to find the door that fitter the key. None of the key holes fitted the key. He gave up and went to his room to take rest. It became dark and his mum called him to have supper. When he woke up the lights were not on. He tried to find the lights in the darkness and tripped over a shelf which twisted around and opened up a passage. Finally, Jack managed to turn the lights on then he noticed the passage to a door. Jack tried to pull the door but it did not open then he remembered the key that he found in the library room and tried to open the door with it. Click, the door opened. He was scared initially to enter the room then he gasped deep breath and crept inside the room with a torch and he noticed some antiques then he thought somebody would have built secret room to save their precious things. He saw a family picture in black and white with father, mother, son and daughter. Then he thought the father in the picture would have built this secret room. The children looked like cute in the photo. There are lots of toys that are dirty and some of them are creepy. A toy caught his attention so he took it and started playing with it. All of a sudden, he started hearing some spooky noise. Jack got scared and rushed downstairs. He ran to his parents and told them about the secret room
I had no idea that there was a secret room in the house.Not until i heard the noise " trumpet trumpet " i followed the noise as soon as i fel ito a trap door.I realised ihad travelled into the stone age period.I tryied to find my way back but that just made my even more lost.Suddenly i heard the sound of a giant mammoth of course it was the trumpet noise i heard.I was so curios i just had to follow it.So i followed it it led my to a cave.I creeped inside i was lucky that no one was there.I saw lots of cave paintings of people,animals and food almost everything was made out of stone as i left the cave i waved.i will never forget this journey!
Brook's mum nodded.Okay but,don't push it.Brook was only four and had just started school when there teacher said to ask their parents about a school trip to Switzerland.Brook was excited.Now that doesn't mean mum was too.In fact,she was horrified when little Brook told her the news.She hated the idea of leaving her daughter alone with her class for a few weeks.
The cool breeze kissed her cheek as it passed by.Brook couldn't believe it.Her mum had finally agreed to pay for the school trip and let Brook go too.So here she was headed to the hotel with the rest of the class.But,little did she know about the huge adventure she was going to have.
She tossed in bed.She couldn't sleep.Suddunly she heard a noise.Again and again it came from the wall.She stared into the darkness for a while.Questions filled in her head.At last she throws of her duvet and gets out of bed she follows the noise and as she got closer the strange noises got louder.She touched the wall with trembling hands. She pushed it.It creeked open. She carefully stepped in.To her surprise the room had a table and on the table was a book and a golden key studded with diamonds and sapphires. The book too was studded with jewels. The book was a hard bound book and had a layer of dust. She blowed it of the book. There was a key hole in it.Unsure of what to do,she picked the key up and gently placed it in the key hole and turned it.Dazzaling light filled the room as the book opened. The book's pages were blank so Brook decided to keep the book and not tell anyone anything about the secret door .Filled with joy she took the key out of the book and slipped it into her pocket and closed the door . The book became her diary .She still had the key with her,just in case. She went back to her house after the school trip.The last week had been fun. And the best day of her life was when she had found that book and the key. She still loves it too and treasures it. She takes it everywhere and even today she still has it.
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise....It was on Friday night, I was making a cup of hot chocolate and one of the glass fell in the basement. I went to find them in the basement and to stick them back together.When I went to the basement I saw a little door behind the box.I went to look inside it.When I went inside it,I saw a rusty key and a book.In the book,there is a key hole.So I gently took the key and put it in the key hole and turned it.You know what,the book opened automatically without even opening with our hands!I rushed back to the basement and continued searching the broken bits of the glass.After a while,I said to my mum and dad,"I saw a secret room in the basement and when I went inside I saw a rusty book and a key.I gently took the key and put it in the key hole on the book and turned it carefully and the book opened automatically without even opening with our hands!" Mum said,"Great,Now lets get you to sleep." From Soham
I never knew there was a secret room in my house until one day I was dusting the library’s shelves. Out of the blue, I heard a creepy noise. I froze motionless. Fear flooded me. I was nervous, however I tried to carry on. As I was rummaging to find ‘Charlie and the Chocolate Factory’, I accidentally pulled the wooden part that supported the books and to my astonishment the bookshelf started opening like a door! At first I thought I broke a part of the library but then the entire section swung open. A whole world of amazing fantasies was there. In one corner, I could see Disney princesses and on the other there were loads of chocolates growing on trees. But I didn’t have much time because my mum was going to arrive soon, I quickly shut the shelves that had swung open. Luckily, she didn’t see the treasure room and I carried on dusting! No way am I going to tell my parents all about this. By Ananya
I was really scared I froze when I heared that noise I cept on scrating myself. When we went in we sor books and a desk the desk had a weared looking phone and it had suspence book on top of it.when we were in there I heared a noise I froze like a tortous"I liked it did you thanks"
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise of a clinking key from the mouse hole. I found a torch and shone it in, the light flickered on. I saw an old rusty key. I picked it up. Then I took it to the kitchen to wash it, it gleamed a bright gold. I searched nearly every room except the kitchen which I could not test because it has no lock. But then I discovered that the key didn't work so I decided to look inside all the rooms. I went in the library last because the walls are covered in shelves and books so it wouldn't really be in there. But to my surprise when I took the last couple of books out the shelf there was a key hole. I put the key and twisted it. It worked! Now I have to tidy up" urgh boring !!!!!!!!!!!!!" By Eva
I went down the stairs it was realy dark and spooky.I could not see anything.I wierd sounds.I was scared however I did not give up.After a while I saw 3 paseges.I went down to the first one.There was a dead and I went down the second one and off I went.I was terryfied.I heard some creepy music and I was getting closer and closer.Suddenly,I saw iron bars and dead bodies everywhere!I knew what it was.It was dongeon.I got out and I ran home.I was sad because I did not get a book.
One day when i was playing in my house suddenly i heard a noise coming under the stairs.First i thought that something fell down but when the noise came again i went to see what it is.I noticed a closet inside the stairs.I never really noticed it before,so i opened it and found a door inside of the wall.I was scared so did not bother to open the door.I went to bed that night and hardly slept.I kept hearing strange noises coming from the closet.Next day morning one of my friends came to my house.I mentioned about the closet to her.We opened the door and went inside.Soon after the door there are 5 steps down and was a big room.The room has no windows and we couldn't see through the dark.We searched for the switch to on the light.We found a large room which had some old antique statues.They were covered with cobwebs and dust.I informed my parents about it then they sent them for auction.Now we use that room as a secret play room.we enjoy playing it that room.
i hade no idea we hade a secret room in our house in till i head the noise like thunder and lightning it was as loud as a elephant. It was terrifying i was to frightening to go in but i needed to no because everybody in the family knows what the treasure is so i went in it was as dark as a haunted mansion so i went inside the room also i could feel something crawling up my back it was all spiky and did not no what it was but i saw a light as light as a moon it was the treasure what was it i saw a chest but id not open it was to big and it needed a key shaped like a star it so big that you would need a masive crane
loyd put his hand on the bookshelf but he did not realise that their was a button.Then their was a flash of noise.The shelf moved! "where in the world did a secret room come from"said loyd.Inside the room their was all sorts of equipment.when loyd piced a pen up then the door started to close but loyd was fast enof to not get trapped and ran allthe way home! THE END! BY ITQUAN
The Secret Room In My House ---------------------------
Last Month, my dad stripped all the carpet in a room in my house to lay wooden flooring and loaded all the carpet and rubbish into his car and went to throw the rubbish in the dump yard. I knew my dad was going to take a long time to come back, so I quietly crept into the room. The room was very quiet and I could hear a squeaking noise from under the room from one corner of the room, I went to see what that noise was and I saw a square wooden patch on the floor right which had a metal latch. When I pulled the metal latch, the wooden piece opened up like an attic door. I peeped inside to see what it was and to my surprise it was a secret room under my house. There was stairs to go down into the room too. For a minute I was so scared, but I got bit brave and thought to go down through the stairs to see what’s inside the room, so I quietly started to walk down the stairs without making any noise. On the very last step I tripped myself and when I was just about to fall down, luckily I found a hanging rope right by the stairs and I griped onto it hardly to balance myself. Suddenly, the dim lights came on which were so dim that we could hardly see anything in the room. With the noise I made, I saw two mice quickly running around to hide themselves or to run away and they vanished in a flash. Although the room was so old, it was still neat and clean. I looked around the room and found a lot of interesting things like a very old desk, but it was a piano, Lot of toys, very old antique furniture and lot more things. I could hear some squeaking sounds and was very nervous, but was still brave. When I went further inside the room, I saw a big box like thing right in the corner. It was covered with full of dust, so, I dusted it with an old cloth which I found right next to it. As soon as I started to clean, it was a chest which started to gleam and I could see it shining. I slowly opened it and I was so thrilled and surprised to see the stuff inside it. The chest was filled with diamonds and precious stones in it and in one corner there was a magical wand too. Suddenly I heard some strange noise and I got frightened so, without touching anything I closed it quickly and ran back up through the stairs where I came from into the room and quickly shut the door back. I never knew there could be a secret room in our house and I was so excited that there was one. When my dad came back home, I told him about the secret room he opened the door and was surprised too just like how I was surprised when I first saw that. The next day me, my dad and my mum all three of us went down into the room and explored lot of other things too. I wish I will invite all my friends to show them the secret room in my house.
I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until i heard the noise just like a lion roar louder than 10000000000000 kid's screaming.I opened the door ah one book fell down to the floor and then the door closed in spooky sound i was brave it was behind my toys to find chese at last it came out and it was my pet mouse.
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A nice twist at the end, Aisha
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until i heard the noise of a glass falling down from the table.I crept inside.When i saw the glass broken on the floor.I fixed the glass.Then a monster apperd and it said thank you.Then we all hade tea.by Mishca
ReplyDeleteYou have some super short sentences!
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise "CLAM!" Something was there but who could it be?I thought it would be a terrifying ghost spying on me. It came again the noise. Something or somebody was moving out there. I felt drops of water slowly drooping like rain in slow motion! Al of a sudden there was a noise like something heavy vibrated the floor. I went in the secret room and I found beautiful money and jewelry things. In fact I never knew we were rich!
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Some lovely descriptive language here.
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in our house.Not until I heard the noise......It was Friday night.It's just me and my brother Keanu upstair.My mom is cooking our dinner in the kitchen.All of a sudden while me and Keanu are playing .I heard a noise.I went downstair and checked where the noise was coming from.I saw a small door .When I opened the door it was dark inside.When I came there,it's like magic. The table was flying.I really got scared and was about to close the door but then I still stayed.I saw old books,old chairs and lots of dirty and dusty old things.There was a bad smell inside.I can still hear a lot of noise.I am afraid it would be some silly mouse and crazy bats.This is really a scary room.I ran and went upstairs.I don't want to see that dark room again.I don't know if i still have to say this to my mum and dad.
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Kristen
A nicely built suspense!
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in my house, when I found out I did not tell my mum and dad because then we will have to leave! "I want to find out more" I told myself. When I went to school I told my friends then they planed a plan, they said "we will come to your house to explore after school" they said.
ReplyDeleteWe quietly pushed the door open CREAK!!! the door swung open, the room was as dark as a dungeon! luckily my best friend Lilly brought her torch from home just in case. The smell was hallow and cold. A sound like a wolf howling in the distance erupted out of nowhere ,clashing against the echoing of our footsteps.
We saw a black broomstick attached into the wall. There were two chairs rocking like some one sitting on them. Suddenly there was a noise like a lion, IT WAS A BOY!!!!! he had been playing tricks on them.
by Methmi
Well used speech marks, Methmi!
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ReplyDeleteI remember seeing the house for the first time. I was a child of seven. My young parents had just bought their first home. I remember I used to hate living in the cramped, dingy apartment we previously inhabited and opened the door to our new home with wide eyed wonder. It blew my young mind how spacious this house was. I went upstairs to scope out my bedroom. I was so excited that I was getting my own room and did not have to share it with my infant brother.
On my grand tour of my new digs, I finally made it down to our basement. The basement was nothing like the rest of the house. The upstairs was elegant and classy. The basement was cold, metallic, and sterile. The ceiling covered in ancient pipes winding in grotesque angles. The floor covered in rough cement. I recall taking a look at the stairs for the first time and being immediately struck with how odd they were.
The stairs were surrounded in drywall which clashed with the rest of the basement. One particular section of the wall was colored differently than the rest. It stood out like a sore thumb. I inched close to it and felt the texture of it. It felt very strange. I then knocked on it. A hollow sound pervaded the empty air of the basement. Something about that sound immediately put me ill at ease. I walked up the stairs as I could hear that same hollow sound echo in the emptiness of the basement.
As we settled into our new home, I began to get comfortable with my surroundings. The house began to feel familiar. Everywhere, that is, except for the basement. It just always put me off, and I avoided going down there as best as I could. Our family couldn’t be happier. My loving father and mother doted over me and my little brother. My life was perfect.
Then it began.
I would hear errant noises. When I pointed it out to my parents, they told me the old standby that the house was settling in. One night in particular indicated that something wasn’t right. I snuck downstairs to the kitchen for a late night snack. As I closed the refrigerator, I heard a tapping sound cut through the silence of the night. I craned my head to see if I could pinpoint where the sound was coming from. Dread began to wash over me as I realized that tapping was coming from the basement. I inched my way over to the basement door. I opened it to see the blackness of the depths below.
My ears perked up. There it was again. That hollow tapping sound. The same sound I had heard on my initial visit to the basement from hitting the drywall. I turned on the lights steeling myself to go down the stairs and investigate. The tapping continued as I took the first step. Fear overtook me. I ran back to my room and hid under my covers until the morning light gave way to a new day.
By Mushtaq
What a fantastic story. I was gripped the entire way through!
DeleteI did not know that there was a secret room near the sitting room.One day I sneaked to the secret room I whent up the lift when the lift launched I came of It I launched at my secret library that I had been before but I didn't notice there was 2 way of getting there.Again I sneaked to library but the way I know how to get there I searched for my favorate book.
ReplyDeletewhile I put on my socks I discovered my favorate book the reason I wore socks was because it was really dusty there.Another day I whent in the lift it took me to a restront.
A nice mystery theme. Make sure your ideas link together.
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DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret door to our attic room.One day I heard a strange noise coming from the secret door.I was so curious to look inside it.After that I opened the door and I saw that it was so dark and scary and dusty and there was lots of books and I grab one and ran out of there.
ReplyDeleteThe room was so messy and dirty and also there was a few spider webs hanging in the walls and there is a smell coming out somewhere.Then I quickly came out from the secret door because I was so scared.And I could not wait to tell everybody about the secret door mystery.
by Mafalda
A good use of feelings and emotions, Mafalda.
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise. I was sleeping in my bedroom a glass smashed on the floor. That was when I went downstairs and saw a secret room. I crept in and there it was. I found the secret room. As I crept in and the room I saw a knife on the floor with some red blood but it was actually ketchup .from Kavin
ReplyDeleteI think you have seen this trick in films but it's well used!
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ReplyDeleteOn last Saturday, Jack and his parents moved to a new house. When they arrived there, his parents were busy unpacking but Jack was started exploring the house. He noticed lots of white cupboards, walls painted in bright colours and brightly lit chandeliers. Then he entered a room which looked like a library with full of books.
Meanwhile a bright yellow coloured book caught Jack's attention, he went close to the book and pulled it out of the shelve then his eyes lit up because he found a big shiny key. He took the key try to find the door that fitter the key. None of the key holes fitted the key. He gave up and went to his room to take rest. It became dark and his mum called him to have supper. When he woke up the lights were not on. He tried to find the lights in the darkness and tripped over a shelf which twisted around and opened up a passage.
Finally, Jack managed to turn the lights on then he noticed the passage to a door. Jack tried to pull the door but it did not open then he remembered the key that he found in the library room and tried to open the door with it. Click, the door opened. He was scared initially to enter the room then he gasped deep breath and crept inside the room with a torch and he noticed some antiques then he thought somebody would have built secret room to save their precious things. He saw a family picture in black and white with father, mother, son and daughter. Then he thought the father in the picture would have built this secret room. The children looked like cute in the photo. There are lots of toys that are dirty and some of them are creepy. A toy caught his attention so he took it and started playing with it. All of a sudden, he started hearing some spooky noise. Jack got scared and rushed downstairs. He ran to his parents and told them about the secret room
-Kaushal
A nice flow and some fantastic dramatic openers.
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in the house.Not until i heard the noise " trumpet trumpet " i followed the noise as soon as i fel ito a trap door.I realised ihad travelled into the stone age period.I tryied to find my way back but that just made my even more lost.Suddenly i heard the sound of a giant mammoth of course it was the trumpet noise i heard.I was so curios i just had to follow it.So i followed it it led my to a cave.I creeped inside i was lucky that no one was there.I saw lots of cave paintings of people,animals and food almost everything was made out of stone as i left the cave i waved.i will never forget this journey!
ReplyDeleteI like the final line where you talk to the reader!
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DeleteBrook's mum nodded.Okay but,don't push it.Brook was only four and had just started school when there teacher said to ask their parents about a school trip to Switzerland.Brook was excited.Now that doesn't mean mum was too.In fact,she was horrified when little Brook told her the news.She hated the idea of leaving her daughter alone with her class for a few weeks.
ReplyDeleteThe cool breeze kissed her cheek as it passed by.Brook couldn't believe it.Her mum had finally agreed to pay for the school trip and let Brook go too.So here she was headed to the hotel with the rest of the class.But,little did she know about the huge adventure she was going to have.
She tossed in bed.She couldn't sleep.Suddunly she heard a noise.Again and again it came from the wall.She stared into the darkness for a while.Questions filled in her head.At last she throws of her duvet and gets out of bed she follows the noise and as she got closer the strange noises got louder.She touched the wall with trembling hands. She pushed it.It creeked open. She carefully stepped in.To her surprise the room had a table and on the table was a book and a golden key studded with diamonds and sapphires. The book too was studded with jewels. The book was a hard bound book and had a layer of dust. She blowed it of the book. There was a key hole in it.Unsure of what to do,she picked the key up and gently placed it in the key hole and turned it.Dazzaling light filled the room as the book opened. The book's pages were blank so Brook decided to keep the book and not tell anyone anything about the secret door .Filled with joy she took the key out of the book and slipped it into her pocket and closed the door . The book became her diary .She still had the key with her,just in case. She went back to her house after the school trip.The last week had been fun. And the best day of her life was when she had found that book and the key. She still loves it too and treasures it. She takes it everywhere and even today she still has it.
Vibha
Well done for updating your account. A very big secret to be kept then in your story. It is well written and definitely a mystery-styled piece.
DeleteI had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise....It was on Friday night, I was making a cup of hot chocolate and one of the glass fell in the basement. I went to find them in the basement and to stick them back together.When I went to the basement I saw a little door behind the box.I went to look inside it.When I went inside it,I saw a rusty key and a book.In the book,there is a key hole.So I gently took the key and put it in the key hole and turned it.You know what,the book opened automatically without even opening with our hands!I rushed back to the basement and continued searching the broken bits of the glass.After a while,I said to my mum and dad,"I saw a secret room in the basement and when I went inside I saw a rusty book and a key.I gently took the key and put it in the key hole on the book and turned it carefully and the book opened automatically without even opening with our hands!" Mum said,"Great,Now lets get you to sleep." From Soham
ReplyDeleteI never knew there was a secret room in my house until one day I was dusting the library’s shelves. Out of the blue, I heard a creepy noise. I froze motionless. Fear flooded me. I was nervous, however I tried to carry on. As I was rummaging to find ‘Charlie and the Chocolate Factory’, I accidentally pulled the wooden part that supported the books and to my astonishment the bookshelf started opening like a door! At first I thought I broke a part of the library but then the entire section swung open. A whole world of amazing fantasies was there. In one corner, I could see Disney princesses and on the other there were loads of chocolates growing on trees. But I didn’t have much time because my mum was going to arrive soon, I quickly shut the shelves that had swung open. Luckily, she didn’t see the treasure room and I carried on dusting! No way am I going to tell my parents all about this.
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I was really scared I froze when I heared that noise I cept on scrating myself. When we went in we sor books and a desk the desk had a weared looking phone and it had suspence book on top of it.when we were in there I heared a noise I froze like a tortous"I liked it did you thanks"
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I had no idea that there was a secret room in our house. Not until I heard the noise of a clinking key from the mouse hole. I found a torch and shone it in, the light flickered on. I saw an old rusty key. I picked it up. Then I took it to the kitchen to wash it, it gleamed a bright gold. I searched nearly every room except the kitchen which I could not test because it has no lock. But then I discovered that the key didn't work so I decided to look inside all the rooms. I went in the library last because the walls are covered in shelves and books so it wouldn't really be in there. But to my surprise when I took the last couple of books out the shelf there was a key hole. I put the key and twisted it. It worked! Now I have to tidy up" urgh boring !!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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I went down the stairs it was realy dark and spooky.I could not see anything.I wierd sounds.I was scared however I did not give up.After a while I saw 3 paseges.I went down to the first one.There was a dead and I went down the second one and off I went.I was terryfied.I heard some creepy music and I was getting closer and closer.Suddenly,I saw iron bars and dead bodies everywhere!I knew what it was.It was dongeon.I got out and I ran home.I was sad because I did not get a book.
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One day when i was playing in my house suddenly i heard a noise coming under the stairs.First i thought that something fell down but when the noise came again i went to see what it is.I noticed a closet inside the stairs.I never really noticed it before,so i opened it and found a door inside of the wall.I was scared so did not bother to open the door.I went to bed that night and hardly slept.I kept hearing strange noises coming from the closet.Next day morning one of my friends came to my house.I mentioned about the closet to her.We opened the door and went inside.Soon after the door there are 5 steps down and was a big room.The room has no windows and we couldn't see through the dark.We searched for the switch to on the light.We found a large room which had some old antique statues.They were covered with cobwebs and dust.I informed my parents about it then they sent them for auction.Now we use that room as a secret play room.we enjoy playing it that room.
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i hade no idea we hade a secret room in our house in till i head the noise like thunder and lightning it was as loud as a elephant. It was terrifying i was to frightening to go in but i needed to no because everybody in the family knows what the treasure is so i went in it was as dark as a haunted mansion so i went inside the room also i could feel something crawling up my back it was all spiky and did not no what it was but i saw a light as light as a moon it was the treasure what was it i saw a chest but id not open it was to big and it needed a key shaped like a star it so big that you would need a masive crane
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loyd put his hand on the bookshelf but he did not realise that their was a button.Then their was a flash of noise.The shelf moved!
ReplyDelete"where in the world did a secret room come from"said loyd.Inside the room their was all sorts of equipment.when loyd piced a pen up then the door started to close but loyd was fast enof to not get trapped and ran allthe way home!
THE END!
BY ITQUAN
The Secret Room In My House
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Last Month, my dad stripped all the carpet in a room in my house to lay wooden flooring and loaded all the carpet and rubbish into his car and went to throw the rubbish in the dump yard. I knew my dad was going to take a long time to come back, so I quietly crept into the room. The room was very quiet and I could hear a squeaking noise from under the room from one corner of the room, I went to see what that noise was and I saw a square wooden patch on the floor right which had a metal latch. When I pulled the metal latch, the wooden piece opened up like an attic door. I peeped inside to see what it was and to my surprise it was a secret room under my house. There was stairs to go down into the room too.
For a minute I was so scared, but I got bit brave and thought to go down through the stairs to see what’s inside the room, so I quietly started to walk down the stairs without making any noise. On the very last step I tripped myself and when I was just about to fall down, luckily I found a hanging rope right by the stairs and I griped onto it hardly to balance myself. Suddenly, the dim lights came on which were so dim that we could hardly see anything in the room. With the noise I made, I saw two mice quickly running around to hide themselves or to run away and they vanished in a flash.
Although the room was so old, it was still neat and clean. I looked around the room and found a lot of interesting things like a very old desk, but it was a piano, Lot of toys, very old antique furniture and lot more things. I could hear some squeaking sounds and was very nervous, but was still brave. When I went further inside the room, I saw a big box like thing right in the corner. It was covered with full of dust, so, I dusted it with an old cloth which I found right next to it. As soon as I started to clean, it was a chest which started to gleam and I could see it shining. I slowly opened it and I was so thrilled and surprised to see the stuff inside it. The chest was filled with diamonds and precious stones in it and in one corner there was a magical wand too. Suddenly I heard some strange noise and I got frightened so, without touching anything I closed it quickly and ran back up through the stairs where I came from into the room and quickly shut the door back.
I never knew there could be a secret room in our house and I was so excited that there was one. When my dad came back home, I told him about the secret room he opened the door and was surprised too just like how I was surprised when I first saw that. The next day me, my dad and my mum all three of us went down into the room and explored lot of other things too. I wish I will invite all my friends to show them the secret room in my house.
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Ithisha